RE: Boredom (en.es) The Inkwell Fiction Prompt #236

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I've gone back to reread your words. It's an amazing story that tells a truth.

Years ago, when I was an adolescent, my mother made friends with the woman who lived across the street. My mother had a way of adopting lost souls. We would visit this woman in the middle of the day. Her curtains were drawn. The room was dark, except for the glare of the television, which was on nonstop. The woman spent her days in front of that TV. I don't remember ever seeing her outside the apartment. I couldn't describe that apartment to you, because it was so dark in there. Her children would come and go. The backstory to all of this, I learned (was it true?) was that her husband was in prison. She had effectively imprisoned herself.

Your story captures my experience with that woman who lived across the street. There is so much truth in your words, although I'm not sure where the line is between boredom and depression.



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Thank you so much for such a lovely and interesting comment. This character was written with someone very special to me in mind, and a beautiful light that went out could not be rescued. There is so much of her and so many memories. Thank you so much for reading this story. Perhaps this way I can keep her alive in my imagination. Blessings on your day, and my sincere thanks and regards.

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By writing about you kept her alive in all of us. She lives in every reader's imagination now...

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