RE: Just One Careless Move

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Jayden's voice is so authentic - that mix of childhood wonder and premature weariness. The way he still dreams of school and misses his friend Jake shows the child he still is beneath it all.

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The innocence of a child cannot be mistaken. Thanks for engaging dear

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