Ice Cold Wrath Of The Broken Bride - Part 1

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5:00pm - (Wedding Day)
With blood oozing out of @trexane’s shoulder, he begged Abenad to spare his life.”I’m so…r..rr.y” he tried speaking.

“Shut up! You’re sorry? Sorry? You disgraced me in front of my family, my friends and even your own family just for money? I told you I had no plans of having a fancy wedding yet,you planned the wedding of the century right in front of the Eiffel tower. You’ve been in my life for good three years and all this while you were hired to cause me pain?All of those years were some games to you? Trexane, a mere game? How much did he pay you for this?How much?@nhaji01 hand me the rest of the bullets”, Abenad instructed her bridesmaid with tears.

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Morning of the Wedding Day
Abenad woke up feeling very nervous and texted Trexane about it.
Trexane replied “I’m so glad I met you,the most happiest I’ve been in life is with you and I can’t wait for you to be my wife.”
Abenad started smiling after reading his text.Her countenance brightened and was ready for her bridal glam. Nhaji came in with a bouquet of flowers from Trexane.Everything seemed perfect for Abenad as she couldn’t wait to see her groom.

“Who is @yahuzah? And why is he calling me?” Nhaji asked
“but it’s your phone so why are you asking me?” Abenad replied.
Nhaji turned the back of the phone only to find that she mistakenly exchanged her phone with Trexane’s when she went for the flowers for Abenad.
“Okay let me pick up and tell him Trexane’s phone is with me.”
”My guyyyy, today is the day Abenad will cry all kinds of tears.She will pay for what she did to our boy, @kingsleyy”Yahuzah spoke aloud and hanged up.
Girl who is Kingsley? huh? who is Kingsley and why are you going to pay for what you did to him? Nhaji asked so confused.

Nhaji now checked Trexane’s phone only to see a WhatsApp group of the three men.The two ladies read the chats and had the absolute shock of their lives. “Let’s meet at our usual spot and celebrate” the last message read.They took notice of the location and kept everything to themselves.
“They don’t need to know we know, I’ll take care of this” Abenad said very angry.
”How?” Nhaji asked knowing how crazy Abenad can get sometimes.

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At the Wedding
For I can’t help falling in love with you, the pianist played as Abenad walked to the altar looking into Trexane’s eyes.It was time for vows exchange.
”You disgust me,……..as expected Trexane said the worst things Abenad had ever heard in her life ,walked out of the premises to his car and drove off.
What ??? Abenad’s mother fainted.

4:58pm
Abenad and Nhaji got to the location of the three men.Kingsley was the first to catch Abenad’s first bullet followed by Yahuzah and then another bullet was sent right through Trexane’s shoulder.
“Ughhhh”,Trexane screamed in pain.
“That was not the revenge plan Abenad, we came to talk so just calm down!!” Nhaji yelled.

To be continued…

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Hi @abenad, this is a beautiful story. It is a cruel thing to abandon a woman at the altar. Nobody deserves to feel such heartache no matter what they might or might not have done. Trexane should have sought other means of ending the relationship but shooting him isn't particularly a wise move from Abenad.

I enjoyed your story but it would be nice to have shorter paragraphs and also have the dialogues in paragraphs so the reader can feel the weight of the spoken words. Nicely written

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It’s fiction dear and the story was meant to be dramatic as requested by the weekly engagement topic.(At least Trexane is not dead yet,good for him😅)

And I understand what you mean,thanks for your suggestions too.

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Oh yes I know it is fiction. You should be happy when your fiction comes across like a real life story. It means you did something right. Well done darling. Great write up once again

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😂😂 oh so Abena just killed me like that? What did I do to deserve death before Trexane 😂. Herr but were smart oo, we came together, made you fall for our boy and made you cry 😂. Hurrayyyy 🥳🥳

This is a very nice story dear, it’s interesting the way you made the plot. I can’t imagine how you finished Trexane off😅.

And oh, Nhaji is nhaji01. You forgot to add the 01 when tagging her.

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Oh okay,I’ll tag her again.

Trexane has to experience a painful death,wait for it😂😂😂

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😂😂 yes, let him suffer.

Will there be a part 2?

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Hah🤣Wetin man do man🤣

Yes there’ll be

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😂😂 man no like man.

Can’t for the part 2

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Temper justice with mercy @abenad. I don't know what came over me 😉

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Something fishy 😅
I hope I don't get to spoil anything at the end... I'm clean as snow you know 😅

Nice write up
Looking forward to other parts

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😂😂😂😂what are you talking about
You were the mastermind

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Abenad, calm down.😂😂
we just came to talk but these men deserve what they got.😂😂 next time they won’t try messing with us.

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Men can be cruel, they deserve what they got, they shouldn't have messed with you in the first place, @trexane should get a bullet through his brain tho🙃🙃🙃

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I thought you were going to say some for him 🤣
His brain?🤣🤣

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Do you want to scatter his brain before he goes to hell😂

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🤣🤣🤣that’s an interesting inspiration for the part 2

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Such an elaborate plan and also scary 😂 I would definitely hate to get on your bad side. @kingsleyy you collected the first bullet 😂 sorry o

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🤣🤣

I’m also sorry for him🤣

Thank you☺️

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Anyone who abandoned a bride at the altar with a reason such as that of Trexane's deserves what is coming for him, But I will beg you to tamper justice with mercy. 🥰😅

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Oh you’re saying some for him,I’ll think about it🤣

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Yeah, just think about it. !LUV

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This bride is not playing oo😂😂😂
Love the plot twist. I was hooked from the first sentence

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Aaaahhh, revenge with bullets in a church premises? The pain must be very deep.As Rod Stewart sang: First cut is the deepest.

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Kia, Abenad you do this one 😂. Someone can not play with you again, small heartbreak play you are throwing bullets

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Not at all🤣🤣
You can’t break heart and go like that 🤣

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Kingsley will always be the first 😂,at this point Kingsley should just watch his back in real life 😂.

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This story is captivating..please release part 2 already, I can’t wait to see how it ends..let me guess bloody right???😩

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😂😂😂

I am yet to know what happens in part two😂

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It is such an interesting story, at first I thought I was reading a storybook, you can create one

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😂😂😂😂The way you included life character is just so interesting
I really love this story 😂😂
But why you kill my friend Kingsley after what you did to him.

Ehnnnn Abenad

!BBH

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@abenad! Your Content Is Awesome so I just sent 1 $BBH (Bitcoin Backed Hive) to your account on behalf of @fashtioluwa. (1/5)

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🤣🤣🤣🤣we don’t know yet if he’s dead

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